http://falling-voices.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] falling-voices.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] orange_crushed 2010-10-14 10:13 am (UTC)

I really like this. Your writing style is precise and to the point, without any oversold descriptions, but still it retains some kind of... delicacy? The last few sentences are a perfect example of this.

And boys. <3 young!Sherlock and young!John are surprisingly adorable in a completely different way than canon.
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