Short fic: Awkward age. (Jack and Eleven meet, and there is... innuendo. In your endo.)

[orange_crushed]

Vignette-thing-time. So thunderemerald was thinking about the inevitable meeting between Jack and our new Eleventh Doctor, and a part of me got... carried away. (As a side-note, thunderemerald is also looking for good Jack-meets-Eleven fics, if you have any !) Spoilers under the cut, sort of. If vague physical descriptions count.


"Oh yes, please." The Doctor grinned. "I've got such an appetite." His eyes widened. "For pizza."






"Jesus Christ," said Jack. "You did this on purpose."

"I did what ?" The Doctor looked up from his position neck-deep in the floor grating; he was looking for the coffee mug Jack had just dropped down there upon walking into the TARDIS and finding, in the other man's words, an extra from 'Skins' doing the re-wiring. Someday he'd either have to ask what that meant or find the TiVO patch. "What did I do ?"

"You're all," Jack sketched a loose outline in the air. "Illegal. I don't know what I did to deserve this."

"You were either very good," said the Doctor, finding the mug and twirling it idly by the handle, "or very, very bad." He set the mug on the grates and lifted himself rather awkwardly out of the gap. "Knowing you-"

"Bad," Jack agreed, without really listening. "So bad."

"I'm not any more flexible in this body than I was in the last one," the Doctor said. A beat passed. His ears turned a magnificent red, and he backed away several inches. "I mean, socially. Concerning attitudes about- parts. My parts. Historiographically. You know what I mean."

"Your loss," shrugged Jack. "Lunch ?"

"Oh yes, please." The Doctor grinned. "I've got such an appetite." His eyes widened. "For pizza."

"I hate you," said Jack.

Comments

[adriana-is.livejournal.com]

(giggles) "I mean, socially. Concerning attitudes about- parts. My parts. Historiographically. You know what I mean." Still a little babbly, I think. :)

I was hoping you'd write something about Eleven soon. This is adorable.

I haven't seen any Jack meets Eleven fics yet. I'm sure they're out there. I've seen a couple of Eleven/Rose ones. I'm sure they'll start coming in soon.

[grbggrl.livejournal.com]

Hee! I could totally see this happening. I just hope we do get that scene. Jack is the only person I think Moffat MIGHT bring back...but unfortunately even then I think it's doubtful. I think he's going to make it crazy easy to distinguish between RTD's Who and Moffat's Who...by never letting us see any of the characters we so love ever again. ::sob::

[goldy-dollar.livejournal.com]

Awwwwww! That was oddly adorable and seemed very IC even though we have no idea what Eleven is going to be like yet. I say YAY! :D

[the-lucky-stars.livejournal.com]

Hee! Loved this.

"Knowing you-"

"Bad," Jack agreed, without really listening. "So bad."

So Jack! And so Eleven. Hopefully. :D

[glorious-clio.livejournal.com]

How did you know I was craving some crack? Thanks for this!

[thunderemerald.livejournal.com]

SHYEAH.

::shoulders blame with pride::

[cjk1701.livejournal.com]

*grins* Considering that Jack first appeared in a Moffat episode, there might be hope.

[orange-crushed.livejournal.com]

*Hands you glittery blame hat.*

You wear it so well.

[thunderemerald.livejournal.com]

zomg.

Need Glittery Blame Hat icon now.

[orange-crushed.livejournal.com]

Eleven/Rose is inevitable: Eleven/Jack will probably follow close behind. I was going to make a dirty pun but stopped myself. Oh dear. Jack has broken my brain.

<3

[orange-crushed.livejournal.com]

Yeah, I feel the same way pretty much- I'd love to see them meet up, but it's likely we won't get as much crossover and returning characters in the new season. The way that JE tried to wrap up loose ends, I think I saw that coming. Oh well- fresh start. (*Desperately does not think about Tennant leaving at all.*)

[orange-crushed.livejournal.com]

I'm actually kind of excited to see how Eleven plays- manic ? Calm ? Moody ? Happy ? Wordy ? He's a whole new realm of possibility. Not that I can really wrap my heart around the idea of Tennant leaving. Possibly ever. *PANICS QUIETLY*

<3

[orange-crushed.livejournal.com]

Jaaaaack. His reaction really would be priceless. Let's hope they get a chance to play off of one another. :)

[orange-crushed.livejournal.com]

*Doses you with crack*

Er, not in an illegal way. ;) You're so welcome !

[orange-crushed.livejournal.com]

YES YOU DO

SPARKLE MOAR

[kaydeefalls.livejournal.com]

Hee! Awesome. I'm really, really, really looking forward to seeing Jack meet Eleven.

[jeonggam.livejournal.com]

IT IS NOT RIGHT WITHOUT INNUENDO. I have always thought this.

Also, I'm quite enjoying some of these Eleven + Jack/Rose fics that have been cropping up. Particularly since they have actually helped me come to terms with Journey's End. (I have made the amazing discovery that now that the Doctor is regenerating, I like Rose's ending a lot more. Funny that.)

ANYWAY. You know you're awesome and incredible. You know your writing is AMAZING. I don't need to tell you that. Oh, wait... ♥ ♥ ♥

[editrx.livejournal.com]

YES.

[tardis-stowaway.livejournal.com]

"I'm not any more flexible in this body than I was in the last one," the Doctor said. A beat passed. His ears turned a magnificent red, and he backed away several inches. "I mean, socially. Concerning attitudes about- parts. My parts. Historiographically. You know what I mean."

Methinks the Doctor doth protest too much. ;)

This scene is so cute I just want to pinch its cheeks! (Inevitably, my inner Jack is now asking which cheeks.)

[nebbity.livejournal.com]

Bahaha!

I can't wait for Eleven, personally. I love Ten to squiggly little bits, but would like to see new episodes in which the Doctor doesn't... you know... cry.

I want to see the new guy, and damnit, I want him to smile!

Soumm... what about Eleven+Master fic? YOU KNOW YOU WANT TO.

[prynne12.livejournal.com]

But in a good way.

::giggles::

This is hilariously funny.

[thunderemerald.livejournal.com]

Feeeeel the sparkle motion....

[thunderemerald.livejournal.com]

YES! THIS! DO IT!

[orange-crushed.livejournal.com]

Methinks the Doctor doth protest too much. ;)

Oh, definitely. You know he's at least curious. About parts. Socially.

Both cheeks. <3

[oxoniensis.livejournal.com]

Hee, this is priceless! Eleven putting his foot in his mouth every time he opens it is brilliant - I will be more than happy if he's like this on the show!

[pikasafire.livejournal.com]

Oh, this is BRILLIANT. I woke up my housemate with my cackling!

"You're all," Jack sketched a loose outline in the air. "Illegal. I don't know what I did to deserve this."

Awesome little ficlet!

Oh, how i hope the 11th Doctor will actually turn out like this! I want adorable-ness and innuendo and flirting!!