ext_75556 ([identity profile] claidissa.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] orange_crushed 2010-01-02 04:35 am (UTC)

Oh, you did write it! That makes me very happy, and I needed a bit of happy today. And it's fluff, too! Bonus.

Your characters are spot on, as usual, and somehow you know exactly what line of dialogue you need to close a paragraph, like the "dreams" line. Loved the little Wonderland tidbits, too, like all the bottle references.

Sorry if my feedback is a little wonky right now but I REALLY LOVE THIS FIC and that's all you need to know. ♥

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