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orange_crushed ([personal profile] orange_crushed) wrote2010-01-01 10:17 pm
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Fic: Bluebottles. (Alice/Hatter, PG)

Bluebottles. Alice/Hatter, PG, spoilers for both parts of SyFy's Alice miniseries. Simple and short, in the key of fluff. Shiny new fandom is shiny and new.



Sometimes happiness tries to smother him with a pillow during the commercial breaks, but he can live with that.




"There ain't no lover like the one I've got,
ain't no lover like the one I've got.
She and I have a brand new start."
-Little Joy
(listen here)





Happiness used to come in a bottle.

"Now it comes from a popcorn tin," says Alice. "Woo." She hands it to him and rests the drinks on the coffee table. "Scooch over."

They're watching an old Grace Kelly movie on television, in black and white, and according to Alice the thin girl on the screen married a prince and became a princess. She says it idly but there's nothing idle about her own close brush with royalty. He glances over just for a second, just to read what she's thinking. Regret? He hopes not. Maybe a touch of nostalgia for finer manners. Expensive presents. Well, alright, he's not in command of all the details. Either way he'd understand. He watches her. She gulps down a handful of cheese-dusted popcorn and laughs with her mouth halfway open.

"You're the perfect woman," Hatter tells her sincerely. She stares at him sideways in suspiciously pleased surprise, settles against him, kisses him with faintly orange lips. He rests his chin on top of her head, pets her hair, leans down to murmur into her ear. "It's an unexpected bonus that you're cheddar-flavored."

Sometimes happiness tries to smother him with a pillow during the commercial breaks, but he can live with that.





He didn't peddle anything he didn't try himself: a twisted honesty but an honesty nonetheless. Hard thing to hold on to, honesty. But there'd been joy, surprise, wonder, all corked up and ready to sell. Optimism, peacefulness. Enlightenment. A particularly expensive draught, that, and hard as hell to come by.

"There's just one thing I don't understand," says Carol one night, over the risotto. Hatter feels a little burst of amusement, because really, one thing? At the moment it feels like there are only a half-dozen things on this planet he can even pretend to understand. He thinks flamingo-Jabberwocky-department of motor vehicles-renter's insurance-community college and looks over at Alice, whose face is also twitchy with held-in laughter. He understands that. This. She's holding his hand under the table.

"What's that ?"

"Why she always calls you Hatter," Carol wonders. "David is such a lovely name. Do you mind being called David ?"

"Not in the least." He gives her a Charming Smile. Charming Smile Number Seventy-Two, for use only on girlfriend's mums. "You can call me anything you like. Just don't call me late to-" he begins, and Alice kicks him in the ankle. As tenderly as she can manage. "Lovely dinner, Carol."

"Thank you." She glances to her daughter. "Is it a nickname ?"

"It's because he wears a hat," Alice deadpans, her eyes innocent-wide. Her mother just stares at her, and Hatter laughs silently into his napkin until he chokes on a piece of carrot and has to be thumped on the back a few times for caution's sake.

Later, they do the dishes.

"You're damaging the merchandise," he complains, when she sprays him a little with the hose attachment. She does it again and giggles and he hugs her with wet hands until she shrieks. Somewhere in the apartment, Carol is smiling and turning the volume up on Cold Case and wondering with a slightly guilty conscience if that hour Alice spent drooling at a construction site involved any blunt-force trauma to the head. "Ah, you're in a very wet dress again," he says, without letting go of her waist. "Your people must've been mermaids. If you look far back enough."

"Mm."

"Mm, you agree, or mm-" he leans down, pauses just as he sweeps his lips against hers. "Just good old mm. Either would do." He's still talking when Alice pulls him down, parts her lips and erases his internal monologue for an achingly long minute. She tastes like the mint she slipped under her tongue after dinner. Like warm raspberries and delight.

He thinks about them sometimes, pure feelings sold and drunk: the giddy highs and vicious lows and plain cold emptiness afterward. At night he rolls onto his side and stares at the curve of her shoulder under the sheet. It's just an outline but it turns his insides over and over like a millwheel. It's the most genuine thing he's ever felt. It's immense and huge and real. In daylight he cracks terrible jokes and puts his coat over her lap in the movie theatre and lets her pay for parking, but in the dark he lines up bottles in his mind and smashes them one by one until he can sleep.

"Are your dreams as strange as mine ?" she asks, in her drowsy Saturday-morning voice, pressed against his collarbone. "I keep dreaming about rabbits."

"Good for a stew, rabbits," he says, and doesn't answer.





In the mornings while she teaches, he walks the city block by block. His destination is usually the public library. You can learn a lot about a world from its library, ask the damn Dodo. Hatter reads the encyclopedia annuals and leafs through yellowing magazines and reads novels in the worn plastic armchairs by the public computers. He reads Jane Austen and Stephen King and a book of fairy tales hidden between the covers of War and Peace. "Enrichment," he tells Alice. "Plenty of room up there, got to fill it with something new. Expanding my mind."

"Expanding." Her eyes are soft and she rests her hip against his, but her smile's a touch more wicked than usual. She grins and twists her index finger through one of the curls above his forehead. "You're going to need a bigger hat," she says. He laughs and pulls her closer. There's a future in this feeling. It's drinking straight happiness from a glass that doesn't empty.

"Cross that bridge when I come to it," says Hatter.

[identity profile] vega-ofthe-lyre.livejournal.com 2010-01-02 03:23 am (UTC)(link)
Ouf. This was just so perfectly lovely and perfectly Hatter, you have quite swept me off my feet with this ♥ Marvelous job!

[identity profile] orange-crushed.livejournal.com 2010-01-02 03:28 am (UTC)(link)
I LOVE YOU, THANK YOU.

I could not be more excited that we are enjoying new fandom together.

[identity profile] superhero-boi.livejournal.com 2010-01-02 03:40 am (UTC)(link)
awwww I love fluff.
expecially well written fluff.

[identity profile] takumachi.livejournal.com 2010-01-02 03:59 am (UTC)(link)
You and me both!

Great job. ^.^
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[identity profile] tygermama.livejournal.com 2010-01-02 04:18 am (UTC)(link)
"It's an unexpected bonus that you're cheddar-flavored." I love this line, I really do. It's perfect.

This is so sweet and in character for both of them.

[identity profile] orange-crushed.livejournal.com 2010-01-02 02:28 pm (UTC)(link)
Ha, I hoped it would fit, I really liked that line. I always tease Mr. Orange about that when he's eating Doritos.

Thank you very much, I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[identity profile] brite-city.livejournal.com 2010-01-02 04:19 am (UTC)(link)
This was adorable. I love the play between Alice and Hatter.

[identity profile] orange-crushed.livejournal.com 2010-01-02 02:29 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! I loved their banter during the show, I always enjoy characters who are in love but tease each other and talk to each other like friends. So fun to write!

:)

[identity profile] danicarip.livejournal.com 2010-01-02 04:20 am (UTC)(link)
You netted their voices! :D Good job, even harder to catch than emotions, voices are.

[identity profile] orange-crushed.livejournal.com 2010-01-02 02:30 pm (UTC)(link)
They really are. It's hard to pin down a speech pattern, so if you think it worked, I'm flattered.

Thank you, as always, for being so kind!

[identity profile] alittleoddish.livejournal.com 2010-01-02 04:32 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, god. I LOVE this fic! XD I get all wrapped up in my own writing, and then I read something like this and I'm like, "well, crap." LAWL

No, seriously. Your Hatter and Alice characterizations are perfect and wonderful. *mems*

[identity profile] orange-crushed.livejournal.com 2010-01-02 02:31 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! And I would happily read your fic if you're working on something. It's really exciting to be at the start of a new fandom where everybody is producing like mad!

:)

[identity profile] claidissa.livejournal.com 2010-01-02 04:35 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, you did write it! That makes me very happy, and I needed a bit of happy today. And it's fluff, too! Bonus.

Your characters are spot on, as usual, and somehow you know exactly what line of dialogue you need to close a paragraph, like the "dreams" line. Loved the little Wonderland tidbits, too, like all the bottle references.

Sorry if my feedback is a little wonky right now but I REALLY LOVE THIS FIC and that's all you need to know. ♥

[identity profile] orange-crushed.livejournal.com 2010-01-02 02:25 pm (UTC)(link)
Yay! Well, sometimes I get excited and yammer about fic and nothing happens, but I was determined this time. :D

Thank you so for the feedback. You're such a darling. It's not wonky at all, it's lovely.
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[personal profile] sucrosesanction 2010-01-02 07:32 am (UTC)(link)
This was very very good. Really in character. Thanks. ♥

[identity profile] orange-crushed.livejournal.com 2010-01-02 02:31 pm (UTC)(link)
Aw, thank you! Your feedback is much appreciated.

[identity profile] crimsonkitty88.livejournal.com 2010-01-02 07:49 am (UTC)(link)
Can I just say that I'm ecstatic that we have a fandom in common again? I GET TO READ YOUR FIC! EEEEE

This was very very sweet and adorable and just over all lovable. Just like Hatter. ^_^

[identity profile] orange-crushed.livejournal.com 2010-01-02 02:32 pm (UTC)(link)
I KNOW IT IS CRAZY I AM EXCITED. Hee. Really, so many people are getting into Alice/Hatter, I'm really enjoying it. Yay new fandom!

<3 Thank you so.

[identity profile] irrel.livejournal.com 2010-01-02 07:52 am (UTC)(link)
That was lovely!

[identity profile] orange-crushed.livejournal.com 2010-01-02 02:33 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you very much! :)

[identity profile] randombattlecry.livejournal.com 2010-01-02 08:04 am (UTC)(link)
Viva la key of fluff!

I loved this so much. Especially the cheddar flavored bits.

[identity profile] orange-crushed.livejournal.com 2010-01-02 02:34 pm (UTC)(link)
Ha, cheddar-flavored Alice. I support fluff, fluff is healthy. :D

Thank you so!

[identity profile] muneca-brava.livejournal.com 2010-01-02 09:58 am (UTC)(link)
Hatter! I love him, and you really got his voice right.

Very sweet. I love that you're writing 'Alice'! ♥ We do seem to have an insane amount of fandoms in common :)

[identity profile] orange-crushed.livejournal.com 2010-01-02 02:35 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you very much! I love him too. :D

We really do! We're just people of impeccable taste, must be. XD It's very exciting to be in a new fandom that is just starting up.

[identity profile] selivia-wanders.livejournal.com 2010-01-02 02:40 pm (UTC)(link)
This was just the bit of sour cotton candy fluff I needed this morning. I love how he started in on that joke about Carol calling him and then chokes on a carrot. Loads of giggling that earned bewildered looks from the other people in the room haha. It was also a nice touch how you had him smashing bottles in his mind at night so they weren't tainting his feelings in the daylight. Truly delightful writing darling!

[identity profile] orange-crushed.livejournal.com 2010-01-02 04:15 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you so! Hatter is a wonderful character and he was a lot of fun to write. Glad you enjoyed this.

[identity profile] betweenthebliss.livejournal.com 2010-01-02 05:09 pm (UTC)(link)
oh my goodness this is perfection. you've really nailed hatter's complicated mind, i can absolutely see all these thoughts and feelings bubbling up in him at once. beautiful piece.

[identity profile] orange-crushed.livejournal.com 2010-01-03 04:22 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you so much! <3
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[identity profile] rashaka.livejournal.com 2010-01-02 10:52 pm (UTC)(link)
Lyrical and lovely. *applause*

[identity profile] orange-crushed.livejournal.com 2010-01-03 04:22 am (UTC)(link)
*does a little bow*

Thank you so!
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[personal profile] nostariel 2010-01-03 12:43 pm (UTC)(link)
OMG HATTER!!

I love this, I love you, I love the whole world, I am slightly drunk, yay!

[identity profile] orange-crushed.livejournal.com 2010-01-03 02:00 pm (UTC)(link)
I am so delighted for you, ha! :D It's mutual, dear.

[identity profile] zombres.livejournal.com 2010-01-03 05:35 pm (UTC)(link)
I LOVE YOU. I LOVE THIS. I LOVE THEM.

I LOVE YOU.

[identity profile] orange-crushed.livejournal.com 2010-01-03 05:58 pm (UTC)(link)
<3 <3 <3

GLEE.

[identity profile] fiery-twilight.livejournal.com 2010-01-04 12:10 am (UTC)(link)
GORGEOUS. ♥ Seriously a lovely piece of fluff. :D

[identity profile] orange-crushed.livejournal.com 2010-01-04 02:15 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you! Sometimes only fluff will hit the spot. :D

[identity profile] ohlookshiny.livejournal.com 2010-01-06 08:28 pm (UTC)(link)
*favourites* this was just so damn adorable; i read the entire thing with a smile on my face. lovely! ♥

[identity profile] elirrina.livejournal.com 2010-01-09 06:04 am (UTC)(link)
Yay! I finished watching it and love this, it's perfect!

[identity profile] gabzillaz.livejournal.com 2010-01-14 09:38 pm (UTC)(link)
This is absolutely perfect and sweet and awesome. <3

[identity profile] orange-crushed.livejournal.com 2010-01-15 03:16 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you!

LOL @ SEAL OF APPROVAL XD

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[personal profile] anr 2010-01-30 09:20 am (UTC)(link)
Beautifully written! I really enjoyed this. :)

[identity profile] flinkkamingo3.livejournal.com 2010-02-06 07:11 pm (UTC)(link)
LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOOOOOOOVE

You know, you are the master of characterization when it comes to attractive, slightly kooky Brits (e.g. Hatter here, Ten). Well, all characters, really, but especially those guys, which I find kind of incredible. I don't know how you get into their brains so well, but there it is. AND HAVE I MENTIONED THAT I LOVE YOU? For this reason and so many others.

Psst you should write more Alice fic.

[identity profile] orange-crushed.livejournal.com 2010-02-07 01:34 am (UTC)(link)
You got me thinking about hot, kooky British guys and it took me like five minutes to check back in and start typing again. *cough* Er, what was I saying ?

Anyway, I love you too. For being so endlessly kind, and for actually reading my ramblings.

(I think I will!)

[identity profile] boxed.livejournal.com 2010-08-08 07:00 am (UTC)(link)
I read and bookmarked this when you first wrote it. I don't know why I didn't actually write you something about how completely and utterly perfect it is. Maybe I was too blinded by the loveliness of it to remember any English. Or decided to reread it a fair more number of times and forgot it was something written and not something I'd seen on television. Or maybe I left in a happy daze forgetting who I even was. I DON'T KNOW BUT I'M REALLY SORRY FOR IT. THIS DESERVES SO MUCH LOVE AND ADORATION.

I've actually just finished a very spontaneous rewatch (it's 3 in the morning) and I needed more and I didn't know what to do with myself until I clicked my little bookmarks button— and lo and behold, here I am sounding like a total idiot in praise of your marvelous writing ability. But yes. I adore this so completely. You rule.

[identity profile] orange-crushed.livejournal.com 2010-08-08 01:07 pm (UTC)(link)
You know, I was all set to have a kind of shitty day and then I read this, and now I think the day is actually going to be kind of lovely. I think the universe knew, and sent you away that first time, because this was going to be perfect. ♥ You are really kind.

Thank you so, so much.

[identity profile] ghostrunner7.livejournal.com 2010-08-31 01:52 am (UTC)(link)
I LOVE YOU. Oh, and this, I guess. I guess I could love that, too.

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