Date: Wednesday, August 25th, 2010 07:22 pm (UTC)
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH. This is amazing. Your writing gets into my brain and plucks out EXACT IMAGES and makes them articulate and beautiful, OF COURSE, LIKE ALWAYS.

Like THIS:

It's quieter than usual, summer haze lying on the neighborhood like a layer of carded wool, fuzzy on the senses. Her hair is tied up, curls soft and loose at the back of her neck. Rose smells like lilies, like soil. A handful of cars pass on the road far behind them, bringing the low comforting hum of engines and the flicker of headlights ghosting on the shapes of trees.

PERFECT.

I am in love with this verse. Epic crossover is FREAKING EPIC. While I like the girl-power aspect of Slayers, this just works somehow. I think it's got something to do with the room getting suddenly very hot when I think about Rose as a vampire. PLEASE WRITE MORE.
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