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How is it that when I want a road trip, instead the werewolf gets one ?



"...Not the early one
That you can wish upon;
Not the northern one
That guides in the sailors."

-Joni Mitchell, "This Flight Tonight"






He has never been more careful. They have not taken the train except under heavy glamours, or stayed in any expensive hotels. Truthfully, they have not stayed at any places which would write your names down in a book; they have slept at a few where clean sheets cost extra. They change suitcases and packs once in a while, and coats, and Sirius has bleached his hair and dyed it back again.

It’s started to be fun.




Sirius has stolen the lobster bib from a greasy dinette at the waterfront, and now he is running along the quay, shouting frightful epithets at seagulls and waving it over his head like a flag. Remus cannot help but watch him run, while the birds scatter and shriek. The western sun trembles along the edges of waves and the outlines of ships in the distance; the edge of the earth arcs like the blade of a saw. It would be romantic if it weren’t silly.

Off in the distance, Sirius has stubbed his toe on something. Remus thinks about calling him back; but there’s no need. The evening is fair and the night will be clear, and they have come much further than they expected these past few days. He will set the wards around their room tonight, and they will sleep deeply, full of fried haddock and cold beer and some small hope for the future.

Sirius is tying the bib to a stick of driftwood now, and hurling it out to sea. He is either signaling ships or attempting to claim the entire ocean; neither of which sounds unreasonable. Remus is tired of making him come inside, be quiet, wear a hat, for God's sake keep his voice down. He wasn’t made for secrecy or for silence, they have learned that so well.

Sirius Black, king in exile, he sighs, and steps onto the sand.

Date: Friday, May 27th, 2005 09:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] the-grynne.livejournal.com
What is it about road trips that always give a narrative an American flavour? Our pair feels dislocated, put in a new landscape, and you paint that landscape with such effortless grace in a few short passages.

There is something both exuberant and awfully sad about Sirius acting like an arse on a beach. (And omg the Jack Sparrow-drunk images are coming hard and fast.) Honestly, I'd read your grocery list and remark on its beautiful sychopated phrases.

Date: Tuesday, May 31st, 2005 07:07 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] orange-crushed.livejournal.com
Ha ! Sirius would have been a wonderful pirate. All drunk and capricious and wicked.

I wasn't really certain where I was sending these two, but you're right, it feels like America. Maybe some lonely New England clam bar. I will send them to the Southwest and give them sombreros and burro rides. Or not.

Oh, and:
-scouring powder
-bread (rye ? no, don't like rye. wheat.)
-elegant broccoli
-onions
-HA !

Couldn't resist ;)

Date: Tuesday, May 31st, 2005 07:47 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] the-grynne.livejournal.com
The lobsters immediately made me think, Maine.

...was that "HA !" an exclamation against the sheer healthiness of the previous items? (Broccoli looks so strange and foreign in italics.)

Mine would need a separate column devoted to varieties of ice cream. :)

Date: Tuesday, May 31st, 2005 08:13 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] orange-crushed.livejournal.com
Oooh, ice cream. I know, I'm ashamed that those were the first foods that came to mind. Come on, brain, you know where the goodness lies.

So, make mine:
-butter pecan
-caramel sauce
-kettle chips
-fried chicken
-hospital stretcher for imminent food coma :)

Date: Thursday, July 7th, 2005 01:06 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] very-neant.livejournal.com
this piece makes it feel like focussed figures on a blurred background, which i really like. under the layers it reads like they read each other; as the only important members of the landscape.

totally american, a bit more reserved, a little beat-y as well, which is what it's all about...

Date: Sunday, March 30th, 2008 10:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] chaperoned.livejournal.com
This piece -- nay, the whole series -- is amazing. It's definitely one of my favorites. It's incredibly how much detail you put into one scene. Your wording is amazing, too.

"The western sun trembles along the edges of waves and the outlines of ships in the distance; the edge of the earth arcs like the blade of a saw."

God, just amazing.

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